Sunday, October 31, 2010

Huuklyeand Cinquor on Negative Capability

When you think
You can’t

Swim.


Moderator’s comments: C’mon Huuklyeand, are we supposed to swallow this hook, line and sinker? No way.

4 comments:

  1. As comments go, do smiles count? I hope so, because mine is about to break my face.

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  2. I have sailed off into lineation heaven...

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  3. William,

    Now that would be a sight to see: A smile making its way up through the thick Michaelian underbrush!

    Jean,

    Ah, yes. I can see that, too: A flotilla of crafty poets!

    Joe,

    Thanks, Joe. For a while there, I thought only Huuklyeand was capable of delineating the fine line between poetic heaven and prosaic hell.

    I'm sure Huukleyeand--keen mathematician that he is--appreciates the fact that all three of you took the time to comment on a poem of only three lines consisting of only six words, thus proving beyond a doubt that 6W /3C = 3L.

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