Monday, July 15, 2013

Evenfall (2)


new moon 

a thin slice, old 
orange-red 

wrinkled sky cut 
deeper than skin 

deep. 



2 comments:

  1. wrinkled sky cut

    This line is sharp when set against the other vowel sequences. The depth of that last word can be felt all the more because of it.

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  2. Sounds like those clustered k's are the culprits here but you found them out--thanks, Duncan.

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