new old kid on the blog, with an occasional old or new poem written off the old writer's block
wrinkled sky cutThis line is sharp when set against the other vowel sequences. The depth of that last word can be felt all the more because of it.
Sounds like those clustered k's are the culprits here but you found them out--thanks, Duncan.
wrinkled sky cut
ReplyDeleteThis line is sharp when set against the other vowel sequences. The depth of that last word can be felt all the more because of it.
Sounds like those clustered k's are the culprits here but you found them out--thanks, Duncan.
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