Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Incendiary

In that instant inflammatory
Something-on-your-mind,

One thought keeps
Burning through

The darkness, nothing
To be left behind.

2 comments:

  1. I like the metrical swiftness of the first two verses, followed by the slower-moving "darkness" of ambiguity & hesitation.

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  2. Conrad,

    Thanks for dropping by with your perceptive comments--much appreciated.

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