new old kid on the blog, with an occasional old or new poem written off the old writer's block
This verse creates wonderful images and sounds in my mind - row upon row of sallow faces. For me it has a 'masochistic' quality that clicks in place with the last word, cool.
Delightful.The sound, I found, goes round and ’round....
Elisabeth,Good to read your 'cool" comments on this one!William,Round and round it goes and where it stops--everybody knows.Thanks to you both.
Wonderful!
Joe,Thanks for your uplifting, upbeat note on this downbeat (de)composition!
This verse creates wonderful images and sounds in my mind - row upon row of sallow faces.
ReplyDeleteFor me it has a 'masochistic' quality that clicks in place with the last word, cool.
Delightful.
ReplyDeleteThe sound, I found, goes round and ’round....
Elisabeth,
ReplyDeleteGood to read your 'cool" comments on this one!
William,
Round and round it goes and where it stops--everybody knows.
Thanks to you both.
Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteJoe,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your uplifting, upbeat note on this downbeat (de)composition!