The suspense is killing me (the reader). A worthy addition to excellent cat poems. I think of William Carlos Williams, though his cat moved. This cat is just as present, still. The narrator and reader wanting, presumably, to know what the cat perhaps knows: what is in there? I like the "ever it" rather than "it ever" at the end, more standstill within the line.
The suspense is killing me (the reader). A worthy addition to excellent cat poems. I think of William Carlos Williams, though his cat moved. This cat is just as present, still. The narrator and reader wanting, presumably, to know what the cat perhaps knows: what is in there? I like the "ever it" rather than "it ever" at the end, more standstill within the line.
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