Saturday, December 27, 2008

Rag Collectors

out gathering winter
scraps of sun-

light on the lone
sunlit corner.


(First published in Poetry Salzburg Review #14)

1 comment:

  1. Fine one! It passes that old test, can't remove a word without losing something meaningful. Title works well both literally and figuratively. Subtle rhymes (or off-rhymes) with winter/corner and sun-/lone. Lovely end of the year posting. . .

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