new old kid on the blog,
with an occasional
old or new poem written off
the old writer's block
The oddest thing: with certain poems, a simple momentary misreading resulting in the permutation of a word or two seems to create a second (or alternate?) poem, read as if "through" the first.(Now the fact that these permutations often seem to be caused by certain visual and possibly mental impairments... well er, let's not dwell overmuch thereon.)In any case (dithered the enfeebled codger), here is the permutation that occurred with this intriguing entry: It would help us both To see through us. Oh well, just saying.
One codger to another, your permutation was the one at the back of my mind but at the last minute I decided to use mine for the sake of rhyme! How's that for a sellout?
yeah !sometimes it's not so easybeing myself, too.
Ed,I guess that makes two of us!