Friday, March 29, 2013

Evanescence Redux


Ream upon ream with you still elusive, 
Lest you slip away forever as if in a dream, 
Let me dream I captured you, dream after dream. 




3 comments:

  1. From "Ream upon ream" to "dream after dream". From one axes to another.

    You can feel that pile high longing fiercely, with the repeated word.

    Beautiful.

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  2. Thanks, WB--one more "dream" and perhaps the Everly Brothers might consider releasing this as a follow-up to their 1958 hit—one's never too old to dream, right?

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  3. In the slipstream of these alluring long vowels may I glide through the dream within the dream into a new morning.

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