new old kid on the blog, with an occasional old or new poem written off the old writer's block
Herrick and derrick are perfect rhymes,happily placed and lightening betimes
deep lightness...beautiful phrase.
In case all other rescue efforts should fail... We're sending out a critical exploration vehicle now.
Poetic responses all three--I must respond by thanking theeAnd adding the phrase "deep lightness"Came from Tom, not me.
Herrick and derrick are perfect rhymes,
ReplyDeletehappily placed and lightening betimes
deep lightness...
ReplyDeletebeautiful phrase.
In case all other rescue efforts should fail... We're sending out a critical exploration vehicle now.
ReplyDeletePoetic responses all three--
ReplyDeleteI must respond by thanking thee
And adding the phrase "deep lightness"
Came from Tom, not me.