Such conviction. Holding on can break us and reveal the tougher stuff beneath the surface, hardening as new skin. :)
I like where you've broken the lines here, resulting in the captivating lines "The inevitable, for the love" and "Of living, I will not perish." Such enjambment is music to my ear. Thanks. Cheers.
Such conviction. Holding on can break us and reveal the tougher stuff beneath the surface, hardening as new skin. :)
ReplyDeleteI like where you've broken the lines here, resulting in the captivating lines "The inevitable, for the love" and "Of living, I will not perish." Such enjambment is music to my ear. Thanks. Cheers.
So nice your penetrating eye saw fit to drop by, observe and comment--I should be the one to thank you.
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ReplyDeleteI love the harsh 'irony' of the piece softened, as S.L.Corsua says, by musical enjambment
Thanks, Conrad, for your thoughts!
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