Thursday, June 10, 2010

Kismet

Though fearing

The inevitable, for the love
Of one more moment

Of living, I will not perish
The thought.

4 comments:

  1. Such conviction. Holding on can break us and reveal the tougher stuff beneath the surface, hardening as new skin. :)

    I like where you've broken the lines here, resulting in the captivating lines "The inevitable, for the love" and "Of living, I will not perish." Such enjambment is music to my ear. Thanks. Cheers.

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  2. So nice your penetrating eye saw fit to drop by, observe and comment--I should be the one to thank you.

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  3. Vassilis

    I love the harsh 'irony' of the piece softened, as S.L.Corsua says, by musical enjambment

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