Saturday, May 7, 2016

Amatorious



no apparitions

                            
                            sprightly

following a long
                         
                            spring

           drizzle, a pair of spar-
rows lightly spar-
ring on

a wet green bough.




3 comments:

  1. This is wonderful, Vassilis. I haven't commented in a long time—didn't want my continuing praise to go to your head. But this seems to step off in a new direction. Not just your moving the lines around spatially, but your surrendering to the moment in a most direct way. Spry, spree, spare, spar ... the sounds hopping around like these amatorious birds. Lovely!

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  2. Musically delightful as well as delightfully full of meanings! Bravo!

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  3. Delighted to hear some great sounding songbirds in their own write chirping in on this little ditty! :)

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