Sheets of lightning vault across A leaden sky on the dome rain Thunders down under the terrible Eye of the Pantocrator the huddled Faithful trampled underneath the crypt Remains sealed no one asks why.
I'll answer anyway. :) Because the lack of punctuation offerss myriad interpretations, but mostly, I mostly liked how it *sounded* when read aloud. And second, it kept drawing me back, hinting of 'look closer, there's more here than what you think'. So I did, and there was. (My verification word was "umsness:).
really liked this one. Re-looked at it six times. :)
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ReplyDeleteI'm not going to ask why you looked at it six times but I'm glad you liked it enough to do so!:)
I'll answer anyway. :) Because the lack of punctuation offerss myriad interpretations, but mostly, I mostly liked how it *sounded* when read aloud. And second, it kept drawing me back, hinting of 'look closer, there's more here than what you think'. So I did, and there was. (My verification word was "umsness:).
ReplyDeleteWell done, Annie--couldn't have done better myself! :)
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