new old kid on the blog,
with an occasional
old or new poem written off
the old writer's block
really liked this one. Re-looked at it six times. :)
Annie,I'm not going to ask why you looked at it six times but I'm glad you liked it enough to do so!:)
I'll answer anyway. :) Because the lack of punctuation offerss myriad interpretations, but mostly, I mostly liked how it *sounded* when read aloud. And second, it kept drawing me back, hinting of 'look closer, there's more here than what you think'. So I did, and there was. (My verification word was "umsness:).
Well done, Annie--couldn't have done better myself! :)