Sunday, July 10, 2011

Sailing the Dream

Air rows,

Sea waves—


Bow quivers.






4 comments:

  1. Vassilis,

    "Bow quivers" literally (& figuratively)moves like the first two lines combined that gave it being.

    Haiku worthy of Issa!

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  2. Always the provocateur of double entendres. Love the bow. Love the bow!

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  3. Conrad,

    Thanks for the comparison to Issa and I'm moved you should think so but I'm afraid my bow does not always shoot such arrows!

    Elizabeth,

    I bow in deference to your wit. :)

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  4. Madrona still lives in your heart (and mine).

    A gift from Querencia and the blackberry temple on Morgan Street, perhaps.

    Aloha my friend.

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