tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954130354262793169.post7291866836958027848..comments2024-03-11T20:39:46.221+02:00Comments on vazambam: Drivenvazambam (Vassilis Zambaras)http://www.blogger.com/profile/14515165428574974933noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954130354262793169.post-50676348086250245322011-09-23T09:45:26.276+03:002011-09-23T09:45:26.276+03:00Tom,
Your keen scout's eye's discovered t...Tom,<br /><br />Your keen scout's eye's discovered those almost imperceptible red tracks here, just as you found out The Squint-eyed Kid you-know-where.<br /><br />Peter,<br /><br />FOR THE MIND OF A SNOWMAN<br /><br /><br />A harrow on<br />a barrow, wheel-<br /><br />barreling down<br />the snowy slope<br /><br />would be <br />even more<br /><br />harrowing.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this one; always appreciated.vazambam (Vassilis Zambaras)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14515165428574974933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954130354262793169.post-79408230237346829152011-09-22T20:21:12.017+03:002011-09-22T20:21:12.017+03:00Tripping over a harrow in the snow would suck.
Tha...Tripping over a harrow in the snow would suck.<br />Thanks for the poem - it was a neat flow of feeling. Left a flower-knife in my mind.Peter Greenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17806372860467057912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5954130354262793169.post-53922579995299604142011-09-22T19:02:05.467+03:002011-09-22T19:02:05.467+03:00So good the way the red edge blade road palate-tap...So good the way the red edge blade road palate-tappings and chewings-over of the thought open out at the driven turning into an open field of flower, harrow and snow. Cut, edged, harrowed and winterwheat-like harvested in the moment of that opening.<br /><br />The word I keep reading through the words is the one that's not here: blood.<br /><br />(Is it just morning exhaustion vision or have I just now seen that red blade edge in the snow drifts on the buffalo plains?)TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915822857461178942noreply@blogger.com